Rain on the lamppost.White canvas shoes, damp. Genesis in my ear—noise that keeps me still. People pass.She says she can’t love me.Maybe.Why don’t I know?
Revisionist Poetry – Don’t Fall in Love, v.3
Rain slices past the lamppost at nightand chills the toes of my white canvas shoes. Genesis moans from the earphones—an origin-song that only shows me my silence. Faces drift past—their small lamps bobbing toward nothing— She says she cannot love me.Perhaps I am already alone. Why was I never warned?
Revisionist Poetry – Don’t Fall in Love, v.2
Rain runs past the lamppost at nightand lands, apologetic, on my white canvas shoes. Genesis hums in my earphones—a low machine-thrum that vibrates my skulland does nothing for my mood. People pass me by, one after another,on their busy errands to nowhere that matters. She says she still can’t love me.Maybe she’s lying.Maybe life will … Continue reading Revisionist Poetry – Don’t Fall in Love, v.2
Revisionist Poetry – The Cookie in the Icebox, v.3 (a.k.a. My Relationship with a Cookie, v.6)
I hold the chocolate-chip as if a coin from some dead altar, its crust a thin, papery epidermis scored with fossil chips. They glitter like teeth, embers trapped in crystallized sugar; beneath that shell a warm cavity yawns, brown sugar and molasses conspiring there in clandestine whisper, a soft counsel of heat. I might rend … Continue reading Revisionist Poetry – The Cookie in the Icebox, v.3 (a.k.a. My Relationship with a Cookie, v.6)
Revisionist Poetry – The Cookie in the Icebox, v.2 (a.k.a. My Relationship with a Cookie, v.5)
I hold the cookie like a coin pried from a grave. Its skin is paper; chips sit like fossil teeth. They glint — dull embers in brittle sugar. Beneath: a warm hollow where molasses whispers. One bite would split it open, spill its secret. Violence buries; devouring is a small grave. I nibble instead, ceremonial, … Continue reading Revisionist Poetry – The Cookie in the Icebox, v.2 (a.k.a. My Relationship with a Cookie, v.5)
Revisionist Poetry – My Relationship with a Cookie, v.4 – Retitled -> The Cookie in the Icebox
Note: I've gone in a darker directions and found some different takes... more to follow after... I hold the chocolate-chip cookie like a coin from a grave —its crust a dry, papery skin, scored with tiny fossil chips.They glitter as if with teeth, dull embers caught in brittle sugar.Beneath that shell I imagine a warm, … Continue reading Revisionist Poetry – My Relationship with a Cookie, v.4 – Retitled -> The Cookie in the Icebox
Revisionist Poetry – My Relationship with a Cookie, v.3
I study this chocolate-chip thing on the plate, its surface a brittle grammar with chips of gold. You can see only a few bright truths at first — crumb constellations clinging to the shell. What the inside must hold: slow heat, brown sugar hymns, a small dark architecture of salt and memory. If I tear … Continue reading Revisionist Poetry – My Relationship with a Cookie, v.3
Revisionist Poetry – My Relationship with a Cookie, v.2
Study the chocolate-chip cookie — a thin, hard planet of sugar. On its skin, chips glint like constellations; beneath, a warmer gravity. I could bite deep and erase the softened center, or nibble forever and never hear the single true note it keeps for itself. So I wrap a corner in foil, ladle fragments into … Continue reading Revisionist Poetry – My Relationship with a Cookie, v.2
Revisionist Poetry – The Apple Tree, v.5
Schooltime in early autumn;the playground is full but hollow,the out-of-bounds field calls, more tempting. The field bristles with burrs and the hush of dying grass,yet the apple tree insists, irresistible and small. We climb to be kings on the age-old tree,claiming crowns from the highest, wind-scarred branches. Power is kept in an arsenal of apples—tokens … Continue reading Revisionist Poetry – The Apple Tree, v.5
Revisionist Poetry – The Apple Tree, v.4
Schooltime in early autumnthe playground is full butthe out-of-bounds field calls, more tempting. The field bristles with burrs,yet the apple tree remains irresistible We race to be kings on the age-old treeclaiming crowns from the highest branches Power is kept in an arsenal of applesall glossy, ripe, but oddly inedible. Old ogres and crones patrol … Continue reading Revisionist Poetry – The Apple Tree, v.4
