Revisionist Poetry – Creepy Island, v.2

Amid the river’s iron breatha black thumb pins the water—an islandso small the moon forgets to name it.A single rowboat keeps its back to shore,paint flaking like old combings of hair. At dusk, houses on the bank shut their windowsas if to hold in one last good secret.One dog barks once, then listens; the reeds … Continue reading Revisionist Poetry – Creepy Island, v.2

Revisionist Poetry – “Satirical” – Discussions #2, v.4

Three polished opinions in a row, bronze-kissed for tourist photo ops:one is the orator—always on, voice sold separately—one is the diplomat—measured, market-tested, certified non-offensive—and one is the “silent partner,” trademarked for dramatic effect. Plaque reads: “We represent nuance. Buy a postcard.”First statue throws headlines like confetti: “Vote for clarity!”Second replies with buffered clauses: “Let’s convene … Continue reading Revisionist Poetry – “Satirical” – Discussions #2, v.4

Revisionist Poetry – “Lyrical ” – Discussions #2, v.3

They rise from kiln and weather, clay and slow astonishment,three figures cupped in light like questions held against a palm.One breathes in quick syllables—peppered sparks that catch the dusk—“Remember,” it murmurs, “the maps, the names, the children’s rooms.”The second measures its words as if weighing bread, soft and exact:“Count what we owe, then cut away … Continue reading Revisionist Poetry – “Lyrical ” – Discussions #2, v.3

Revisionist Poetry – Discussions #2, v.2

They rise from earth and flame: clay fired into witness,three figures planted on the plaza like a question.One spits syllables—short, bright as flint—“Remember the border,” it says, “remember the lists.”The second counts each answer, folds it into its mouth,“Measure the rent, count the votes, soften the edge,” it counsels.The third hunches, palms pressed to its … Continue reading Revisionist Poetry – Discussions #2, v.2

Revisionist Poetry – “Statue Gallery Negotiations” – Discussion #1, v.4

In the dim gallery a single bulb walks the floor.Three sculptures lean together, elbows of stone touching,a private parliament on a shared plinth. Bronze clears its throat — a small metallic scrape —and speaks first, hands like oars pointing outward:“Borders are wounds,” it says. “We stitch them with paperand call the stitch a treaty. It … Continue reading Revisionist Poetry – “Statue Gallery Negotiations” – Discussion #1, v.4

Revisionist Poetry – “Silent Council” – Discussion #1, v.3

Three statues lean into a private parliament of stone.A single bulb makes slow decisions across their knees;bronze knuckles etch coastlines into the gallery's base,marble eyes hold the names they dare not say aloud.They quarrel with the language of the body —a cracked thumb points east, a jaw tightens like a border,a fractured nose becomes the … Continue reading Revisionist Poetry – “Silent Council” – Discussion #1, v.3

Revisionist Poetry – “Plinth Politics” – Discussion #1, v.2

In the dim gallery a hush leans close.Three sculptures arc into a conspiratorial semicircle —a bronze hand scratches a map across the plinth,marble brows furrow where battles once were scored.They do not speak; they point with chipped fingers,name cities like lit matches and toss them down.One bears a child's palm impressed into its flank —a … Continue reading Revisionist Poetry – “Plinth Politics” – Discussion #1, v.2

Revisionist Poetry – “Coin of Light” – Inner Contemplation, v.3

Her thought is a coin of light flipping in the air;I see it tumble and settle on the curve of her face.She sits—knee scabbed, thumb inked with blue—and the ordinary becomes a small cathedral. In that quiet the child returns:a comet of laughter, a paper boat on the kitchen sink,eyes like glass where new mornings … Continue reading Revisionist Poetry – “Coin of Light” – Inner Contemplation, v.3

Revisionist Poetry – “Holding This Moment” – Inner Contemplation, v.2

Outside the hush behind my eyes,I catch her paused, a small held breath—a bright mote of thought rising, tentative. Then the child appears: candid, careless,chin freckled, hands still bearing clay,a photograph taken in the bright of ordinary. My chest floods with a love that wants to hold her—not to bind but to shelter: hands cupped … Continue reading Revisionist Poetry – “Holding This Moment” – Inner Contemplation, v.2

Revisionist Poetry – “Close-Up on a Broomstick Moon” – Ready for my close-up, Mr. Deville, v.4

Note: Imagine Tom Waits commenting on the photoshoot... They roll the lights in like rolling thunder — a couple of cheap halos and a broomstick moon.The director, he’s wearing a shabby fedora full of old applause, squints through the viewfinder like a man checking the bottom of his glass.Those little white flowers — holy little … Continue reading Revisionist Poetry – “Close-Up on a Broomstick Moon” – Ready for my close-up, Mr. Deville, v.4